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    #1

    businesscard

    I made a business card for me (personal) as Financial advisor , inside the card I have written the following, would you agree with it?


    First Name Family Name (Financial advisor)
    SECURITIES DEPOSITORY
    Regulatory compliance
    CLEARING and SETTLEMENT
    MARKET REGULATION
    RISK MANAGEMENT
    CAPITAL MARKETS
    STRATEGY

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    #2

    Re: businesscard

    Hi madunix.

    To my humble opinion, too much information for a business card.
    José Manuel Rosón Bravo

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    #3

    Re: businesscard

    It is rather a lot.

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    #4

    Re: businesscard

    Why is the capitalization inconsistent? Why are these words in all capitals anyway? It makes it difficult to read.

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    #5

    Re: businesscard

    Quote Originally Posted by madunix View Post
    I made a business card for me (personal) as Financial advisor , inside the card I have written the following, would you agree with it?


    First Name Family Name (Financial advisor)
    SECURITIES DEPOSITORY (Can people leave money and other securities with you? Isn't this a function of a bank?)
    Regulatory compliance
    CLEARING and SETTLEMENT
    MARKET REGULATION (This seems to be what governments do)
    RISK MANAGEMENT
    CAPITAL MARKETS
    STRATEGY
    Without knowing more about your particular business, I would lay the card out this way -

    Joe Smith
    Regulatory Compliance & Risk Management Specialist
    2202 Main Street
    Yourcity
    Tel: 343-445-4545
    jsmith@ abc.com

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    #6

    Re: businesscard

    Much better.
    José Manuel Rosón Bravo

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    #7

    Re: businesscard

    Note that it's a "business card" (two words), not "businesscard" as you wrote in your title.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #8

    Re: businesscard

    Quote Originally Posted by SoothingDave View Post
    Why is the capitalization inconsistent? Why are these words in all capitals anyway? It makes it difficult to read.
    Good point- writing in capitals is not helpful.

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