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    #1

    We aim toward our goal of being the best performers in the dancing competition.

    We aim toward our goal of being the best performers in the dancing competition.

    Is the phrase in bold correct in the sentence? Also, are there any errors in the sentence?

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    Re: We aim toward our goal of being the best performers in the dancing competition.

    Quote Originally Posted by Tan Elaine View Post
    We aim toward our goal of being the best performers in the dancing competition.

    Is the phrase in bold correct in the sentence? Also, are there any errors in the sentence?

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    It is a bit awkward. Try: "Our goal is to be the best performers in the dancing competition".

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    Re: We aim toward our goal of being the best performers in the dancing competition.

    Thanks Mike.

    Do we aim toward... (Or should it be another preposition?)

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    #4

    Re: We aim toward our goal of being the best performers in the dancing competition.

    Quote Originally Posted by Tan Elaine View Post
    Thanks Mike.

    Do we aim toward... (Or should it be another preposition?)

    Thanks.
    We often aim toward....

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    #5

    Re: We aim toward our goal of being the best performers in the dancing competition.

    Note that in BrE, you will see and hear "towards" too.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #6

    Re: We aim toward our goal of being the best performers in the dancing competition.

    Quote Originally Posted by Tan Elaine View Post
    We aim toward our goal of being the best performers in the dancing competition.

    Is the phrase in bold correct in the sentence? Also, are there any errors in the sentence?

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    In addition to MikeNewYork's suggestion (which sounds best), simply saying "we aim to be..." sounds cleaner.

    (not a teacher, just a language lover)

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