I want to email my university for Request Deferral of Admission for my postgraduate studies. Here is the draft;
As mentioned earlier,
I'm) (Avoid contractions in formal correspondence)I am unable to start my course this Sept 2013 due to some financial restraints. According to my sponsor who is XXX, I must start my PhD course no later than April 2013 otherwise, I have to reapply for XXX for next year (2014). This might be risky as there are ahundreds of applicants who wish to obtain afinancial aid from XXX every year. SoTherefore, I would like permission to start my PhD later than Sept 13 and before April 2014, that I believe it willwould be onin Spring or Autumn 2014. Thank you for your consideration.
Student or Learner