Deferral of Admission

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surdni

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Hi...

I want to email my university for Request Deferral of Admission for my postgraduate studies. Here is the draft;

Dear Sir,
As mentioned earlier, I'm unable to start my course this Sept 2013 due to some financial restraints. According to my sponsor who is XXX, I must start my PhD course no later than April 2013 otherwise I have to reapply for XXX for next year (2014). This might be risky as there a hundreds of applicants who wish to obtain a financial aid from XXX every year. So, I would like permission to start my PhD later than Sept 13 and before April 2014, that I believe it will be on Spring or Autumn 2014. Thank you for your consideration.
 

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Hi...

I want to email my university for Request Deferral of Admission for my postgraduate studies. Here is the draft;

Dear Sir,
As mentioned earlier,[STRIKE] I'm [/STRIKE] ) (Avoid contractions in formal correspondence) I am unable to start my course this Sept 2013 due to some financial restraints. According to my sponsor who is XXX, I must start my PhD course no later than April 2013 otherwise, I have to reapply for XXX for next year (2014). This might be risky as there are [STRIKE] a [/STRIKE] hundreds of applicants who wish to obtain [STRIKE] a [/STRIKE] financial aid from XXX every year. [STRIKE] So [/STRIKE] Therefore, I would like permission to start my PhD later than Sept 13 and before April 2014, that I believe it [STRIKE] will [/STRIKE] would be [STRIKE] on [/STRIKE] in Spring or Autumn 2014. Thank you for your consideration.

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surdni

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Thank you very much
 
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