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Hi everyone, I was previously an intern with a securities firm, and is now trying to add this experience into my CV.
During my internship I did 30% of my supervisor's work and so reduced 30% of her workload.
I wrote in my CV, "Replaced over 30% of equivalent workload of supervisor daily in brokerage activities",
but I just feel that it doesn't sound right. How should I change it? (grammatically and in terms of style)
That's not a sentence.
Colorless green ideas sleep furiously.
Most sentences in a resume aren't complete. It reduces the need to write "I" incessantly. This is pretty standard practice for English language CVs, as far as I know.
Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.