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    #1

    Tim threw his knife at John, which went into his arm.

    Tim threw his knife at John, which went into his arm.

    Is the sentence OK? Thanks.

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    Re: Tim threw his knife at John, which went into his arm.

    As it is, the first image that comes to mind is John going into his arm.

    "Tim threw a knife at John, and hit him in the arm" is probably less ambiguous, but I doubt if it's still the best option.
    Please be aware that I'm neither a native English speaker nor a teacher.

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    Re: Tim threw his knife at John, which went into his arm.

    Quote Originally Posted by Tan Elaine View Post
    Tim threw his knife at John, which went into his arm.

    Is the sentence OK? Thanks.
    Not if I were John.

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