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    Hi,
    Is this correct sentence?

    "The Italian zest for life is also Milan shopping madness and proximity to the world of fashion".

    Thank you in advance

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    Re: correct sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by dkqmail View Post
    Hi,
    Is this correct sentence?

    "The Italian zest for life is also Milan shopping madness and proximity to the world of fashion".

    Thank you in advance
    No. I don't understand what you are trying to say. Can you try again?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #3

    Re: correct sentence

    Is the sentence structure here correct?

    "Zest for life in Italy is also meeting with world of fashion and shopping madness in Milan".

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    Re: correct sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by dkqmail View Post
    Is the sentence structure here correct?

    "Zest for life in Italy is also meeting with world of fashion and shopping madness in Milan".
    I don't understand how a zest for life (a person's enthusiasm for life) can meet fashion or madness.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #5

    Re: correct sentence

    Now, is this correct sentence?

    In Italy, you can meet with world of fashion and embrace of shopping madness in Milan.

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    That's even worse.

    What are you trying to achieve here, and why?

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    #7

    Re: correct sentence

    Is this correct sentence?

    Also, you can discover the world of fashion and feel Milan shopping madness.

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    #8

    Re: correct sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by dkqmail View Post
    Is this correct sentence?

    Also, you can discover the world of fashion and feel Milan shopping madness.
    Hello, dkqmail.
    I personally prefer "frenzy" to "madness" in that context.

    Quote Originally Posted by Rover_KE View Post
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    What are you trying to achieve here, and why?

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    #9

    Re: correct sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by dkqmail View Post
    Is this correct sentence?

    Also, you can discover the world of fashion and feel Milan shopping madness.
    It's not natural.

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