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Please tell me what of the following "nested" phrases is correct:
The cost of Services hereunder shall be VAT free based on Sub-clause 2 of Clause 2 of Article 149 of Chapter 21 of Tax Code of the Russian Federation.
The cost of Services hereunder shall be VAT free based on Tax Code of the Russian Federation, Chapter 21, Article 149, Clause 2, Sub-clause 2.
Thank you in advance
I agree. The second one is MUCH easier to follow.
I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.