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- Aug 12, 2013
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- Native Language
- Armenian
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- Angola
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- Australia
I saw a hat in the monkey’s cage at the zoo. I was wondering whose hat it was. “Who's gone into the cage? “ I yelled. “It's such a dark cage. Look, this monkeys moving its tongue. It's going to eat the hat! “ A little boy then came up to the cage. “Is that your hat?” I asked him.
“It's their hat,” he replied, looking at the crowd standing beside him. Mister Williams then pushed his way from out of the crowd, and said that the owner, Doctor Smith, wouldn't come back to claim the hat.Suddenly Doctor Smith appeared and said angrily, “There is more than one hat in there and they are all mine."
Is the above passage I wrote correct? I have googled and read heaps of information about grammar in a writing that using speech marks, and have written this using it, but i'm still unsure. Is the capitals in the correct place? Does the question mark? still come before the " marks? Please correct this grammar for me if any of it is wrong...
Am i missing any commas etc?
Thanks sooo much for your help
“It's their hat,” he replied, looking at the crowd standing beside him. Mister Williams then pushed his way from out of the crowd, and said that the owner, Doctor Smith, wouldn't come back to claim the hat.Suddenly Doctor Smith appeared and said angrily, “There is more than one hat in there and they are all mine."
Is the above passage I wrote correct? I have googled and read heaps of information about grammar in a writing that using speech marks, and have written this using it, but i'm still unsure. Is the capitals in the correct place? Does the question mark? still come before the " marks? Please correct this grammar for me if any of it is wrong...
Am i missing any commas etc?
Thanks sooo much for your help
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