Student or Learner
I am wondering if my sentences are correct. Please would you correct my mistakes. I would like to know if I could use the word "pinprick" in this kind of sentences.
1. In the dark summer sky twinkled thousands pinpricks of stars.
2.Watching across the sea, he saw the pinpricks of village homes flickering in darkness.
Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.