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Even though it rained heavily, the children enjoyed the outing
I have transformed the sentence as follows Is it correct?
Despite the fact that it was raining heavily, the children enjoyed the outing.
Please be aware that I'm neither a native English speaker nor a teacher.
Thanks, Bhaisahab and Charliedeu.
I showed my friend the answer and he said that it should be Despite the heavy rain, the children enjoyed the outing.
Is his sentence correct? Thanks.