Results 1 to 3 of 3

Threaded View

Previous Post Previous Post   Next Post Next Post
    • Member Info
      • Member Type:
      • Student or Learner
      • Native Language:
      • Chinese
      • Home Country:
      • Malaysia
      • Current Location:
      • Singapore

    • Join Date: Aug 2013
    • Posts: 2
    • Post Thanks / Like

    Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other

    I am taking IELTS academic, please help me to correct my mistake, THANK YOU for your patience.

    Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.

    Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
    Discussion of sport’s reward is popular now. There are people who believe that an athlete is reasonable to obtain a greater reward than other occupations. It is my personal contention to agree with it. However, I do appreciate that there is some people will disagree with it. This essay will address it and to draw a firm conclusion.
    First of all, some people object it with several reasons. Those sportsmen are usually talented and have inherited good physical condition. When they compete with others that are not talented, they usually won it easily. This resulted in those not talented people will find for other jobs. In addition, if those sportsmen won a game, maybe the prize is equal to a normal worker’s annual income. For example, Malaysia government conferred one million money reward which equal to an ordinary worker 10 year salary or more to their national badminton player, Lee Chong Wei if he has won the Olympic game.
    However, these athletes only inherited good physical condition. They have to train their skills by themselves. It is essential to devote time, academic achievement, family’s relationship to training. In order to succeed, consistency and perseverance are necessary. Additionally, it is also a big risk. For instance, once they are injured, the country may not support their vastly medical payment and this brings many negative impacts. If they cannot recover their previous statues, they may be eliminated by the younger generation started to give up. This problem is exacerbated if they involved in drug. This leads them to a debauched life and never has the impetus to continue their career so they will suffer in their entire life.
    By and large, I still strongly agree that athletes should be given a greater reward because they need to scarify more things to reach the aim. In addition, success is everyone desires but not everyone can achieve because not only talented potentials are essential but many other capabilities.
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 17-Aug-2013 at 21:49. Reason: Made font size bigger - original too hard to read.

Similar Threads

  1. [General] a great deal of
    By vil in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: 29-Aug-2010, 19:14
  2. [Essay] Toefl Essay: Does a person need to earn a lot of money to be considered successful?
    By verona506 in forum Editing & Writing Topics
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: 01-Feb-2010, 22:30
  3. [Grammar] a great deal of causes
    By salas1907 in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 3
    Last Post: 07-Sep-2009, 21:30
  4. Replies: 2
    Last Post: 17-Oct-2008, 13:56

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts