Cristina.W
Member
- Joined
- Jan 26, 2013
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Romanian
- Home Country
- Romania
- Current Location
- Romania
I have recently thought of sending a feedback message to a social network, and I wish you would tell me if I made any errors:
"It would be better if people's comments did not disappear when they deactivate their account. That way, the abscence of certain comments would not be so confusing and inesthetic. So I suggest although someone's account could not be accessed, the comments they have left before deactivation should still be seen."
Did I miss any comma?
Is it too stilted?
Thank you.
"It would be better if people's comments did not disappear when they deactivate their account. That way, the abscence of certain comments would not be so confusing and inesthetic. So I suggest although someone's account could not be accessed, the comments they have left before deactivation should still be seen."
Did I miss any comma?
Is it too stilted?
Thank you.