[Grammar] extension letter

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manzarbanoo

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Could you please edit my letter?

[FONT=arial, sans-serif]I am writing to ask you an extension for due date of university enrollment on 8th October. My visa appointment will be on 29th August, therefore, I wont be able to enrol on time.[/FONT] I was wondering if it is possible for you to send me an extension[FONT=arial, sans-serif] letter via email. Also, I was supposed to receive a letter, indicating that the LENC program is in English, and that my current TOEFL score, 517, is acceptable by the university, but I have not yet received it. I would appreciate it if you could send it before 29th August. [/FONT]
 

Englishpolyglot

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I would suggest the following corrections:

"I am writing to ask you for an extension for the university enrollment deadline on 8th October. As my visa appointment will be on 29th August, I will not be able to enroll in time. I was wondering if it would be possible for you to send me an extension letter via email. I was also supposed to receive a letter indicating that the LENC program is in English, and that my current TOEFL score, 517, is acceptable by the university, but I have not received it as of yet. I would appreciate it if you could send it before 29th August."
 
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