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    Her friend

    Please would you take a look at this sentence and correct my mistakes. I am not sure if this sentence structure is correct.

    Her friend told her that her name was on a death list, which she already had a premonition of.

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    Re: Her friend

    You need to use some names. Whose name was on a death list? Who had the premonition?

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    Re: Her friend

    Could I rewrite this sentence in the following way:

    Her male friend told her that her name was on a death list, which she already had a premonition of.

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    Re: Her friend

    There's no ambiguity there.

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    Re: Her friend

    Quote Originally Posted by 5jj View Post
    There's no ambiguity there.
    I would write "which she had already had a premonition of".

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    Re: Her friend

    Quote Originally Posted by bhaisahab View Post
    I would write "which she had already had a premonition of".
    I probably would, but I don't think the past perfect is essential.

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    Quote Originally Posted by 5jj View Post
    I probably would, but I don't think the past perfect is essential.
    For me it sounds strange without it.

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