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    #1

    Is this sentence correct?

    Hi Teachers,

    Is this sentence correct?

    "Please take a strong initiative against DRUG within the shortest possible time, and it should be visible after your commitment. Parent/society will get good confidence about you."

    Action like:Press conference, Give a open order to Police,our honorable PM give a Speech at Parliament.

    Thank You,
    Abir

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    Re: Is this sentence correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by abir999999 View Post
    Hi Teachers,

    Is this sentence correct?

    "Please take a strong initiative against DRUG within the shortest possible time, and it should be visible after your commitment. Parent/society will get good confidence about you."

    Action like:Press conference, Give a open order to Police,our honorable PM give a Speech at Parliament.

    Thank You,
    Abir
    Not only does your main sentence not make any sense but nor does the sentence beginning with "Action like". What are you trying to say?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Is this sentence correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    Not only does your main sentence not make any sense but nor does the sentence beginning with "Action like". What are you trying to say?
    I request some one to take action against DRUG and I want to give few suggestions by "Action like" sentence.

    Thanks.

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    Re: Is this sentence correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by abir999999 View Post
    Hi Teachers,

    Is this sentence correct?

    "Please take a strong initiative against DRUG within the shortest possible time, and it should be visible after your commitment. Parent/society will get good confidence about you."

    Action like:Press conference, Give a open order to Police,our honorable PM give a Speech at Parliament.

    Thank You,
    Abir
    I assume that you are addressing this to someone who is actually capable of taking the actions you suggested. If so, I would write something like this:

    Please take a strong and visible commitment to combat drugs as soon as possible. Parents and society will have much more confidence in you if you do. I suggest that you take actions such as giving a press conference, giving the police more powers and asking the Prime Minister to give a speech in Parliament.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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