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    #1

    The more,the more

    Hello
    Is this sentence correct,please?
    The more your car is expensive,the more people look at you in this country
    Thank you very much for your help.

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    #2

    Re: The more,the more

    Welcome to the forums.

    'The more expensive your car is, the more people look at you in this country.'

    You forgot the final full stop. Leave a space after a comma.

    Rover

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    #3

    Re: The more,the more

    Quote Originally Posted by feri TT View Post
    Hello.
    Is this sentence correct, please?

    The more your car is expensive, the more people look at you in this country.

    Thank you very much for your help.
    Your member profile shows that you are an English teacher. As such, it is very important that you use correct written English on this forum because learners here will read your posts and assume that they are written correctly. Be careful with your punctuation and spacing.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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