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What do you think might be wrong with it - apart from the missing spaces that I have marked with a #?The wilderness#is defined as an uncultivated, uninhabited, and inhospitable region. Yet, as Roderick Nash explains in Wilderness and the American Mindand as Jon Krakauer exemplifies in Into#the Wild, people are always being drawn towards the wild. The similarities between adventurers, including#Christopher McCandless, Everett Ruess, Jon Krakauer, and many more, are#astounding. Those venturing into uninhabited#regions are detaching themselves from the faults of man and society in order to#live their alternative lives alone and in peace; instead, they are consumed by feelings#of melancholy and depression.Isolation
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