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    With the development of its - Which is grammatically right?

    With the development of its - next generation- mega pixel IP camera, Zed Security Systems has introduced cameras that are specifically designed for high performance in extreme low-light conditions.

    With the development of its next generation of mega pixel IP camera, Zed Security Systems has introduced cameras that are specifically designed for high performance in extreme low-light conditions.

    Which is grammatically right? I think the first one, as next generation is added information - please help.

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    Re: With the development of its - Which is grammatically right?

    I prefer the second option.
    Please be aware that I'm neither a native English speaker nor a teacher.

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    Re: With the development of its - Which is grammatically right?

    To me they are both wrong.

    It should read "next-generation megapixel IP camera."

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