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    Smile Good bye song

    Hello. Would you please give me your opinion?
    The lines below are from a good-bye song wraping up a class. (Target kids are around 5 to 7 years old)
    And the underlined word is the brand name of a textbook.
    Do you think they are awkward? Would you please give me your opinion on this?
    Thank you.

    Bye-bye. Good-bye.
    See you next time!

    Bye-bye. Good-bye.

    Think-U next time!

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    Re: Good bye song

    Quote Originally Posted by frindle View Post
    Hello. Would you please give me your opinion?
    The lines below are from a good-bye song wraping up a class. (Target kids are around 5 to 7 years old)
    And the underlined word is the brand name of a textbook.
    Do you think they are awkward? Would you please give me your opinion on this?
    Thank you.

    Bye-bye. Good-bye.
    See you next time!

    Bye-bye. Good-bye.

    Think-U next time!
    I have no idea what "Think-U" is supposed to mean. In addition, we never hyphenate "goodbye" and "Bye bye" is generally written as separate words. I don't know where you found this song but whoever wrote it down, wrote it very badly. I would find a different song, if I were you.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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