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Kindly check for me below grammar mistakes
Thanks for the information. Also please find the new item check list for the mini bar refills.
Also I mentioned expired date records In order to avoid spoilage and staff must to check expired date and should removed items from mini bar one month before the expired .
Don't start with "Dear boss".
Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.