Maxli
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- Sep 20, 2013
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
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- English
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- England
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- England
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They do not make good role models because their role in society is so insignificant that they do not greatly effect our world as much as doctors, who save millions of lives, teachers, who educate the future of this country, or the mother with two jobs working tirelessly so that she can send her two children to University.
They do not make good role models because their role in society is so insignificant that they do not greatly effect our world as much as doctors, who save millions of lives, teachers, who educate the future of this country, or the mother with two jobs working tirelessly so that she can send her two children to University.