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    Post CORRECTION MY SENTENCE

    hi iam jansi tier 4 student visa applied new collage my visa refusal paragraph 322(12)not satisfied paragraph 245zx(A) outstanding NHS charges over 1000 pounds still now 3450 pounds outstanding because i arrived 2010 October 5th at the moments heavy pregnant iam, student tier 4 visa more than 18 month lawfully residency in uk i full paid collage fees
    8250 pounds my baby born October 16th two days i go the collage my collage say take maternity leave differ the course . but our hospital say paying full money NHS charges 3650 .at the moments no money in my hands i say i paid monthly 20 pounds they accept last one year i paid 20 pounds every month but my visa refused home office we give right of appeal my question i paid NHS outstanding amounts one shot ?
    pls reply jansi

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    #2

    Re: CORRECTION MY SENTENCE

    You need to put your writing into sentences if you want anyone to have any idea what you are talking about.

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    Re: CORRECTION MY SENTENCE

    Quote Originally Posted by kuma921 View Post
    hi iam jansi tier 4 student visa applied new collage my visa refusal paragraph 322(12)not satisfied paragraph 245zx(A) outstanding NHS charges over 1000 pounds still now 3450 pounds outstanding because i arrived 2010 October 5th at the moments heavy pregnant iam, student tier 4 visa more than 18 month lawfully residency in uk i full paid collage fees
    8250 pounds my baby born October 16th two days i go the collage my collage say take maternity leave differ the course . but our hospital say paying full money NHS charges 3650 .at the moments no money in my hands i say i paid monthly 20 pounds they accept last one year i paid 20 pounds every month but my visa refused home office we give right of appeal my question i paid NHS outstanding amounts one shot ?
    pls reply jansi
    Welcome to the forum.

    In order to use the forum efficiently, it is important to follow the rules of written English:

    - Start every sentence with a capital letter.
    - Always capitalise the word "I" (first person singular).
    - Always capitalise proper nouns (English, Jani, Visa.
    - End every sentence with a single, appropriate punctuation mark.
    - Do not put a space before a comma, full stop, exclamation mark or question mark.
    - Always put a space after a comma, full stop, exclamation mark or question mark.
    - Use full standard English words (ie, use "please", not "pls").

    You can now click "Edit Post" in your original post and make changes to it, following the rules I have given you. After that, we will look at the content.

    If you spent 18 months legally in the UK, I would expect your English to be better. The standard of your English will not help with your visa application at the moment.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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