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    Is this a complete sentence?

    Is the following sentence (a slogan) complete or do I have to rephrase it?

    To make the journey as much fun as arriving!

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    Re: Is this a complete sentence?

    Cut out the "To", and you are left with the slogan "Make the journey as much fun as arriving!"

    Strictly speaking, it should be either "Make the journey as much fun as the arrival!", or "Make journeying as much fun as arriving!" ......but I think your version rolls off the tongue better.
    I'm not a teacher of English, but I have spoken it for (almost) all of my life....

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    Re: Is this a complete sentence?

    Quote Originally Posted by Snowcake View Post
    Is the following sentence (a slogan) complete or do I have to rephrase it?

    To make the journey as much fun as arriving!
    You can also make it a full sentence by adding "is" and by changing the form of the end of the sentence.

    To make the journey is as much fun as to arrive.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Is this a complete sentence?

    There is no need for a slogan to be a complete sentence.
    Making getting there as much fun as being there.
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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    Re: Is this a complete sentence?

    Quote Originally Posted by Snowcake View Post
    Is the following sentence (a slogan) complete or do I have to rephrase it?

    To make the journey as much fun as arriving!
    Have as much fun getting there as being there!

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    Re: Is this a complete sentence?

    Also, since no one has explicitly answered your question yet, no, it's not a complete sentence.

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