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    Cool Corporation optimal inner communication and thinking is pivotal

    Does it work my attempt to compact the following sentence?

    "Company, organization, and /or corporation optimal inner communication and thinking is pivotal." Too blurred?

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    Re: Corporation optimal inner communication and thinking is pivotal

    Try "Optimal corporate internal communication and thinking are pivotal."

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    Re: Corporation optimal inner communication and thinking is pivotal

    Quote Originally Posted by SoothingDave View Post
    Try "Optimal corporate internal communication and thinking are pivotal."
    Thank You, but wha's optimal is the in-house communication and thinking, not the corporate. Is putting "optimal" in the first place affecting all that is following?

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    Re: Corporation optimal inner communication and thinking is pivotal

    Yes. It is all optimal. Optimal corporate communication, not corporate optimal communication.

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    Re: Corporation optimal inner communication and thinking is pivotal

    However, what do you mean by "optimal thinking"? It's rather vague.
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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    Re: Corporation optimal inner communication and thinking is pivotal

    To think in a proper way when it comes to in--house communication, corporate communication

    Thank You

    Quote Originally Posted by Barb_D View Post
    However, what do you mean by "optimal thinking"? It's rather vague.

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    Re: Corporation optimal inner communication and thinking is pivotal

    Optimized internal communication and employee engagement are essential.

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