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    Exhibition Description

    Dear forumers,
    could you please check a few lines (grammar, capitalization, etc.) from my English version of an art project description (plate on a wall):
    (source language Russian) Thank you!

    Subway, 2013

    An "Akt" art-group project

    The project implemented in cooperation with Ivan Petrov

    We wish to thank for support: Syktyvkar City Administration,
    Homeowners Association "Lenina 89", "ShouTekhnik" company

    We would also like to personally thank:
    Oleg Azarov, Tatyana Vlasyeva, Nikolay Gabov

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    #2

    Re: Exhibition Description

    Quote Originally Posted by Grincat View Post
    Dear forumers,
    could you please check a few lines (grammar, capitalization, etc.) from my English version of an art project description (plate on a wall):
    (source language — Russian) Thank you!

    Subway, 2013

    An "Akt" art-group project

    The project implemented in cooperation with Ivan Petrov

    We wish to thank for support: Syktyvkar City Administration,
    Homeowners Association "Lenina 89", "ShouTekhnik" company

    We would also like to personally thank:
    Oleg Azarov, Tatyana Vlasyeva, Nikolay Gabov
    The description seems fine. I would remove the "The" before "project" in the 3rd line (and then capitalize the "P" in project).

  3. Newbie
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    #3

    Re: Exhibition Description

    Dear Mike,

    Thank you very much!

    I have posted another question concerning this project: Art Project Description

    If you have some spare time, could you please also take a look at that thread too.

    TNX again!

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