GilHi, I need your help to edit my formal email to an English language university...well, my native language is not English so Iím very anxious about it . I know itíll have a very essential effect on my application Öso it would be helpful if you could correct my mistakesÖ
Your e-mail shouldn't have that much of an effect on your application. You are merely asking for routine information. The person who reads this e-mail will most probably be a clerk, not a decision maker.
October 16, 2013
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am contacting you for the following reason. My name is Maryam Abbasi. I live in Iran, Tehran.My husband and I have decided to continue our studies abroad. I am Iranian and 24 years old. I graduated with a bachelor's degree in Microbiology from ___ University. My husband, ___is Afghan and he is 23 years old. He is a senior at_____University inand is studying for his Bachelor of Laws.
We are extremely interested
to applyin applying for an M.A. program in your renowneduniversity.
I would appreciate it if you would indicate the academic entry requirements and the qualifications needed for international students to
apply in_____ be admitted to your university. And I would like to inquire about the international studentsístudent's tuition fees and accommodations.
Thank you in advance for your attention to my request. I look forward to receiving your response.
Student or Learner