Hi, I really need your help to edit my formal e-mail to a university. Thanks a lot!
This is the e-mail:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to inquire more information about the East Asian Art History program in ……..University. I am currently a high school student in Vietnam. My great passion is studying Asian Art, especially East Asian Literature. Therefore, I am so interested in your East Asian Art History program that I am anxious to apply for it in your famous university for admission in 2015.
First, I would appreciate it if you could indicate the academic entry requirements and qualifications needed to be accepted into your university.
Second, I would like to request more details about English language requirements for applicants from non-English speaking country and the international student’s tuition fees.
Thank you in advance for your attention to my inquiry. I look forward to your response.
Yours sincerely,