Student or Learner
I've found the following:
Some critics have panned this new film from director and co-writer Joseph Kosinski, in this his second film ("TRON: Legacy"), as being highly derivative.
Should this phrase "this his second film" be written as "this second film of his"?
Thank you very much in advance for your help.
Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.