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    Smile Please help me check the two sentences.

    Hello everyone, I am new to the site and I am so glad that some English experts can help me with my poor English.
    First of all, Shall I say "Please help me check the following two sentences", "Please help me check the two sentences" or "Please help me check following sentences"? Actually, I am always confused that if "the" and "two" can work together.

    I am working on my paper and I hope someone can help me with the following sentences,

    1, ** played a role as internal auditor to add value, improve company's operations and (to) help company accomplish objectives.

    2, ** was responsible to prepare payroll, journal entries, bankreconciliations, and (to) assist manager with financial statements.

    3, ** was responsible to prepare monthly budget and(to) analyze variation between the budget and actual result.

    Please check the words with red color. Do I need to use those words in my sentences?

    Thank you so much
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    Re: Please help me check the two sentences.

    Quote Originally Posted by summyang View Post
    Hello everyone, I am new to the site and I am so glad that some English experts can help me with my poor English.
    First of all, Shall I say "Please help me check the following three sentences", "Please help me check the two sentences" or "Please help me check the following sentences"? Actually, I am always confused that if about whether "the" and "two" can work together.

    I am working on my paper and I hope someone can help me with the following sentences,

    1, ** played a role as an internal auditor to add value, to improve the company's operations and to help the company accomplish its objectives.

    2, ** was responsible to for preparing the payroll, and for journal entries, bank reconciliations, and (to) assisting the manager with financial statements.

    3, ** was responsible to for preparing the monthly budget and (to) for analyzing any variation between the budget and the actual result.

    Please check the words with red color. Do I need to use those words in my sentences?

    Thank you so much
    See my corrections above.
    I'm not a teacher of English, but I have spoken it for (almost) all of my life....

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    Re: Please help me check the two sentences.

    Grumpy, Thank you so much for your help.
    Now, I have learned how to write those sentences in my paper.
    I will keep working on my English because it is so fine to learn something new.

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