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    Putting many elements together on a formal letter

    I need to encapsulate a summary of my relevant experiences in a short sentence in a formal letter. Is this sentence grammatically correct, or do you have a suggestion for improvement, such as breaking it into smaller pieces?
    "...Moreover, as a former researcher at NNNN, I have extensive background in quantitative research, and in analysis, interpretation, and presentation of data in the form of research reports and at the level of professionalism in a national laboratory."

    Thanks for your responses.

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    Re: Putting many elements together on a formal letter

    It looks good to me.

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