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    ERGENT: help on a short paragraph

    I am a student who is desperate about learning English well and am asking for any suggestions that could be given regarding my essay.

    Here it is:
    Upon entering the house, one passes a very narrow opening of a small-sized kitchen, into a row of cupboards--stubby and uneven--with jam jars, notebooks and comics piled on top, and photos pasted on the wall space directly above, tilted, and slowly pealing--the edges scrunched up, just a little, like the peel of an orange; and from here, passing into the bright, clean living room crammed with furniture.

    Thanks!

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    Re: ERGENT: help on a short paragraph

    Welcome to the forum, 112358.

    We like to help when we can, but we don't help with homework assignments. Your teacher wants to know what we can do, not what we can do.

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    Re: ERGENT: help on a short paragraph

    For info, the correct spelling is "Urgent". Note that such words should not be used on this forum. We work to our timetable, not yours.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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