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    can you help me with my English.

    im talking about dream. (((we were basically lying on my bed, you were holding me and I was snuggling up to you.It was almost as if you was protecting me also. Somehow we were watching Eclipse on my laptop.)))) Is it all correct to use?

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    Re: can you help me with my English.

    Quote Originally Posted by Aswoowm View Post
    im talking about dream. (((we were basically lying on my bed, you were holding me and I was snuggling up to you.It was almost as if you was protecting me also. Somehow we were watching Eclipse on my laptop.)))) Is it all correct to use?
    You were either on the bed or not. Why use "basically"? A space is needed after a period. Not "you was protecting", "you were protecting". I assume that you were watching the laptop with your eyes and that the laptop was turned on, why use "Somehow"?

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