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It is indisputable that technological innovations in communication have a great effect on people's lives.
Consider the countless consequences of technological changes in recent years. Our lives are being altered by modern technologies like computers and the internet.
Increasing use of computers has brought about both positive and negative changes for society. Before the digital era, people built their relationships based on visiting each other, writing letters etc. In contrast, people today spend much of their time in front of monitors. Personal relationships are not as strong as before.
On the other hand, new technologies like smart phones are much easier and faster. We now have access to virtually anyone, anywhere. Distance isn't a problem anymore. Social platforms like facebook, twitter or Google help people to share news, their common interests and emotions. Furthermore, businesses can interact more easily with customers to sell or buy goods.
As far as I'm concerned, technology has a big impact on society, but in itself it is neutral. People are the ones who decide how to use technology and whether it is used for good or bad purposes. What is certain is that the rapid pace of using technology for communication is likely to continue.
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