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    #1

    could you check my letter please

    Ok i think i am not a very good typist so please ignore the small i and concentrate on my grammar and style and spelling and thanks in advance


    Dear sally,
    I'm sorry i haven't written since last week but I've been busy settling down to my new town.Anyway i decided to drop you a line to let you know about my new life.
    Our new town is very quiet and lovely as I'm living right in the heart of the town with a marvelous view of a park so I can unwind on the green refreshing grass and breath a clean air.It's very different from the town I used to live in as there are many things to do that I'll never be at a loose end.
    I got to a very modern school.In fact it was build last year and what glad me that it's only a ten minute walk to school from my home so i wouldn't walk up early! It has state of art facilities,professional teachers and super size cafeteria! that wasn't offered in my old school.
    To my surprise I met a new friend which has the same character as yours. she is strong willed and light-hearted. she knows all types of tricks and she'll make you cry your eyes out.Although she can be a major nuisance and a pain in neck the school would be like a graveyard without her.
    Looking forward to hearing from you and I hope you're hunky-dory! give my love and kisses to your younger brother.
    Love from,
    Ema
    Last edited by H.ahmed; 17-Nov-2013 at 00:03.

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    #2

    Re: could you check my letter please

    Welcome to the forums.

    Is this a homework assignment? When is it due to your teacher?
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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    #3

    Re: could you check my letter please

    yes it is due tomorrow thanks in advance

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    #4

    Re: could you check my letter please

    Then I'm sorry, but we can't help you. Your teacher needs to see what you can do, not what we can do.

    After your submit it, if your teacher makes comments you don't understand, please come back and ask us then.

    Make sure you leave a space after your periods. The expression is "at loose ends." Be careful with how much slang you use.
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 17-Nov-2013 at 01:29. Reason: typo
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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    #5

    Re: could you check my letter please

    Your letter is identical to that posted by Kamha earlier today.

    Both threads are closed and both posters are banned for trying to trick us into helping you to cheat.

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