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Please help me correct the following sentence I usually use in my emails (i.e. structure, grammar, etc..):
Please find attached both the Japanese and Chinese translations on "The Princess And The Pea" for your further actions, please.
And, is the use of preposition "on" above correct? Should I use "for" or other similar/related words?
Last edited by whitechalk; 20-Nov-2013 at 04:08.
Delete the final please. You don't need to start and end with it.
"and the" should not be capitalized: The Princess and the Pea. (The first "The" is capitalized because it's the first word.)
I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.