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whitechalk

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Hello teachers,

Please help me correct the following sentence I usually use in my emails (i.e. structure, grammar, etc..):

Please find attached both the Japanese and Chinese translations on "The Princess And The Pea" for your further actions, please.


And, is the use of preposition "on" above correct? Should I use "for" or other similar/related words?

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'...translations of...'

Thank you very much. Despite the work pieces I sent via emails, and email language need not be too formal, I need to observe the language of my email recipient who is a native (English) speaker.
 
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Delete the final please. You don't need to start and end with it.

"and the" should not be capitalized: The Princess and the Pea. (The first "The" is capitalized because it's the first word.)
 
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