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    Please check the grammar in my composition. :)

    Since ancient times people have to tame animals. But then people have to tame animals to have defense from dangerous ones (Animals. I don't know how correct to use). Now people have pets to love and care about them. Usually people buy dogs and cats, but also they buy other pets. Men like to care and love pets. Fot people need pets for vital balance. In social poll scientists learn the main reasons for need in house pets. They speak that pets gift for men love and care.
    1)You need someone or something psyhical around you.
    2)You need something to fill the void in your life.
    3)You need something to control.
    4)You need something or someone to need and depend on you.
    5)You need a purpose in life.
    I have and love my 2 pets. And I think, but all like to have pets.


    PS: Please check the grammar in my composition. :) Thank you :)

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    Re: Please check the grammar in my composition. :)

    Quote Originally Posted by BlowUp View Post
    Since ancient times people have to tame animals. But then people have to tame animals to have defense from dangerous ones (Animals. I don't know how correct to use). Now people have pets to love and care about them. Usually people buy dogs and cats, but also they buy other pets. Men like to care and love pets. Fot people need pets for vital balance. In social poll scientists learn the main reasons for need in house pets. They speak that pets gift for men love and care.
    1)You need someone or something psyhical around you.
    2)You need something to fill the void in your life.
    3)You need something to control.
    4)You need something or someone to need and depend on you.
    5)You need a purpose in life.
    I have and love my 2 pets. And I think, but all like to have pets.


    PS: Please check the grammar in my composition. :) Thank you :)
    Is this a homework assignment?

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    Re: Please check the grammar in my composition. :)

    I need to write the composition "Our Pets".

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    Re: Please check the grammar in my composition. :)

    Quote Originally Posted by BlowUp View Post
    I need to write the composition "Our Pets".
    I'm sorry, but we don't help with homework. The teacher wants to see your work, not our work.

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