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    Is this phrase correct?

    Is this phrase correct?

    Creative Armory for Professional Digital Handcrafted Authors.

    Thank you in advance :)

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    Re: Is this phrase correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by bmachina View Post
    Is this phrase correct?

    Creative Armory for Professional Digital Handcrafted Authors.

    Thank you in advance :)
    The phrase seems strange to me. What is it supposed to describe?

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    Re: Is this phrase correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by MikeNewYork View Post
    The phrase seems strange to me. What is it supposed to describe?
    Hi and thanks for the quick reply.

    Im a Designer and this phrase is a tagline from one of my insignia's that im going to release in the market very soon.

    Basically i just want to say that inside the package you would find creative content like vectors, shapes, textures, and other designer tools.
    This package is for Professional Authors in this business that make this digital shapes and crafts by hand.

    Thanks

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    Re: Is this phrase correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by bmachina View Post
    Hi and thanks for the quick reply.

    Im a Designer and this phrase is a tagline from one of my insignia's that im going to release in the market very soon.

    Basically i just want to say that inside the package you would find creative content like vectors, shapes, textures, and other designer tools.
    This package is for Professional Authors in this business that make this digital shapes and crafts by hand.

    Thanks
    I am not familiar with the terminology used in your field, but "Professional Digital Handcrafted Authors" sounds to me as if the authors are "handcrafted".

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    Re: Is this phrase correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by MikeNewYork View Post
    The phrase seems strange to me. What is it supposed to describe?
    Hi and thanks for the quick reply.

    Im a Designer and this phrase is a tagline from one of my insignia's that im going to release in the market very soon.

    Basically i just want to say that inside the package you would find creative content like vectors, shapes, textures, and other designer tools.
    This package is for Professional Authors in this business that make this digital shapes and crafts by hand.

    Thanks

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    Re: Is this phrase correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by bmachina View Post
    Hi and thanks for the quick reply.

    Im a Designer and this phrase is a tagline from one of my insignia's that im going to release in the market very soon.

    Basically i just want to say that inside the package you would find creative content like vectors, shapes, textures, and other designer tools.
    This package is for Professional Authors in this business that make this digital shapes and crafts by hand.

    Thanks
    Yes, you have posted that already.

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    Quote Originally Posted by MikeNewYork View Post
    I am not familiar with the terminology used in your field, but "Professional Digital Handcrafted Authors" sounds to me as if the authors are "handcrafted".
    Exactly! That not sound good to me neither.
    Is there name for the person who makes the Crafts? I want to say that Person is as a Digital "Craft Maker" Author?
    Something like "Creative Armory for Digital Professionals "Craft Makers"? Theres is no problem to drop the (Author) or something.

    Thanks again

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    Quote Originally Posted by bmachina View Post
    Exactly! That not sound good to me neither.
    Is there name for the person who makes the Crafts? I want to say that Person is as a Digital "Craft Maker" Author?
    Something like "Creative Armory for Digital Professionals "Craft Makers"? Theres is no problem to drop the (Author) or something.

    Thanks again
    American Heritage Dictionary lists "handcrafter" as a noun. Does that work for you? Also, is "digital" needed in your title?

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    Welcome to the forum, bmachina!

    Is "Creative Armory" a commonly used label meaning a collection/inventory/supply of professionally designed software? Are you aware that there are several companies that already use "Creative Armory" in their business name?

    'Creative Armory for Professional Digital Handcrafted Authors' does nothing to excite me! Is there an alternative title you are considering?

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    Re: Is this phrase correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by MikeNewYork View Post
    American Heritage Dictionary lists "handcrafter" as a noun. Does that work for you? Also, is "digital" needed in your title?
    Yes "digital" its very important for me.
    And something like:
    "Creative Armory for Professional Digital handcrafters"?
    Last edited by bmachina; 20-Nov-2013 at 22:15.

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