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    Please check the English..thanks

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    The State Government of Maharashtra is immensely proud
    that the Government of India has given us the great honor -

    for building a grand memorial
    of Bharat Ratna Dr Babasaheb Ambedkar
    at 4.8 hectare Indu Mill Land.

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    The State Government of Maharashtra is deeply honoured
    that it has been acknowledged by the Government of India
    to build a grand memorial
    of Bharat Ratna Dr Babasaheb Ambedkar
    at 4.8 hectare Indu Mill Land.

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    Re: Please check the English..thanks

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
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    The State Government of Maharashtra is immensely proud
    that the Government of India has given us the great honour
    of building a grand memorial
    to Bharat Ratna Dr Babasaheb Ambedkar
    at 4.8 hectare Indu Mill Land.

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    The State Government of Maharashtra is deeply honoured
    that it has been directed by the Government of India
    to build a grand memorial
    to Bharat Ratna Dr Babasaheb Ambedkar
    at 4.8 hectare Indu Mill Land.
    Reading your drafts, it's not clear whether the Indian Government has directed the State Government to build the memorial, or has merely acknowledged that the State Government is going ahead with the building.
    I'm not a teacher of English, but I have spoken it for (almost) all of my life....

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