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    #1

    They were taking over....

    Please check.
    They were taking over of this company untill now, but from now on we'll be responsible on it. It seems the company were going through a bad patch, while we took control over it, but business is picking up and we're planing big export at the end of this year.
    Last edited by englishlearner77; 26-Nov-2013 at 17:59.

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    #2

    Re: They were taking over....

    Please fix the spacing around the punctuation before we look at the content.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #3

    Re: They were taking over....

    I'm so ashamed myself. Sorry. I'll correct.

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    #4

    Re: They were taking over....

    Quote Originally Posted by englishlearner77 View Post
    Please check.

    They were taking over of this company untill until now, but from now on we'll be responsible on for it. It seems the company were was going through a bad patch (no comma here) while we took control over of it, but business is picking up and we're planning a big export at the end of this year.
    My amendments are above in red. I'm a little confused over who "They", "the business" and "we" are but I assume the rest of the context will make it clear.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #5

    Re: They were taking over....

    "They"_company's managers (in the past). "We"_new manager and new company staff. "business"_can be something what company works for.

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