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    Hallow, teachers

    I'd like to ask you show me my grammar mistakes in my small 50-word summary. I'm not native speaker so do not judge me strongly.

    Here is my summary)).

    "Because of the global crisis and in consequences wrong strategic management whole Europe has involved into the process of stagnation. Enormous damage has done to the small business. Potentially strong Italian companies had to be closed. Following the strategy of Japan economic recovery Europe should spend nearly decade to survive."

    I hope you cought my point

    Thaks in advance
    Last edited by andots; 27-Nov-2013 at 17:26. Reason: I had some grammar mistakes

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    Re: Help me to understand my grammer mistakes

    Quote Originally Posted by andots View Post
    Hallow, teachers

    I'd like to ask you show me my grammar mistakes in my small 50-word summary. I'm not native speaker so do not judge me strongly.

    Here is my summary)).

    "Because of the global crisis and in consequences{Because of amd in consequence of are the same, so you don't need both} wrong {incorrect or bad are more natural and better here than wrong} strategic management the whole of Europe has involved {not involved; falled or descended} into the process of stagnation. Enormous damage has been done to the [omit the} small business. Potentially strong Italian companies had to be closed. Following the strategy of Japan economic recovery Europe should spend nearly decade to survive." That last sentence is very difficult to understand. My best guess is that the author means Europe will need at least a decade to recover.

    I hope you cought my point

    Thaks in advance
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    That would be caught and thanks,
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    Last edited by probus; 28-Nov-2013 at 06:31.

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    Re: Help me to understand my grammer mistakes

    This is the second time you have posted this text for correction with a slightly different title, andots, after being told by 5jj that we don't help with homework. Please don't do that again.

    I am tempted to delete this thread but for the fact that probus has gone to a lot of trouble to correct your work.

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    Re: Help me to understand my grammer mistakes

    Thanks a lot probus!!!I undertood all my mistakes I had made in my summary after your explanation!

    You are GREATE HELPER!
    Last edited by andots; 29-Nov-2013 at 14:44.

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    Re: Help me to understand my grammer mistakes

    I really appologise that I've done something wrong. It was the first time I used this interesting informational resource like your forum. I won't repeat my mistake again.

    I've just written my summary and wanted someone checked it out and underlined all my mistakes I've made. It was just persoanl interest. I didn't want your help would be seen like request to do my homework.

    Thanks in advance for understanding

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