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    #1

    sentence improvement

    He is so intelligent that he could win the quiz competition.
    a.will
    b.can
    c.no improvement
    2. children with disabilities and special needs also have right to education just like normal children
    a.just as normal children do.
    b.along with normal children.
    c.no improvement

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    #2

    Re: sentence improvement

    Quote Originally Posted by ram kiran View Post
    He is so intelligent that he could win the quiz competition. You could also use may or might.
    a.will Correct, but not an improvement. It changes the meaning.
    b.can Incorrect.
    c.no improvement
    2. Children with disabilities and special needs also have a right to education just like normal children.
    a.just as normal children do. I think this is an improvement. It clarifies that the children with special needs may not be educated in the same classrooms as those withiout.
    b.along with normal children. This may actually be worse because it may be perceived as implying that children with special needs must be educated right alongside those without.
    c.no improvement
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    #3

    Re: sentence improvement

    Quote Originally Posted by ram kiran View Post
    He is so intelligent that he could win the quiz competition.
    a.will
    b.can
    c.no improvement
    2. children with disabilities and special needs also have right to education just like normal children
    a.just as normal children do.
    b.along with normal children.
    c.no improvement
    Please do not name all of your threads as "sentence improvement". The title of the thread should contain some words from the question. This one could have been "He is so intelligent that he could".

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