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    complex sentences

    May I have some advice on the sentences below. Which one is better? Thank you in advance.

    1. He was still a controversial person as he was criticized for being cruel and violent despite his great contribution.
    2. He was still a controversial person and criticized for being cruel and violent despite his great contribution.

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    Re: complex sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by bean066 View Post
    May I have some advice on the sentences below. Which one is better? Thank you in advance.

    1. He was still a controversial person as he was criticized for being cruel and violent despite his great contribution.
    2. He was still a controversial person and criticized for being cruel and violent despite his great contribution.
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    Re: complex sentences

    thank you

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    Re: complex sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by bean066 View Post
    Thank you. Unnecessary, but at least take the trouble to write it in grammatical English.
    Your appreciation is welcome but there is no need to write a new post to say thank you. Simply click the Like button on any posts you find helpful. It means that we don't have to open the thread again to read your new post and then find that it doesn't include any new information or an additional question.



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