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    Using "if" two times in a sentence

    Hello,
    Can we use "if" in a sentence two times?

    For example:

    If you come to my chat room, if you see any member bothers you, just tell me to bounce him.

    To me, it's a little awkward sentence because I have use "if" two times. What's your opinion about my self made example? Would you please help me on that?

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    Re: Using "if" two times in a sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by alex_genius_20 View Post
    Hello,
    Can we use "if" in a sentence two times?

    For example:

    If you come to my chat room, if you see any member bothers you, just tell me to bounce him.

    To me, it's a little awkward sentence because I have use "if" two times. What's your opinion about my self made example? Would you please help me on that?
    It is incorrect. Remove the first comma and and change the second if to "and". Then delete "you see".

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    Re: Using "if" two times in a sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by MikeNewYork View Post
    delete "you see".
    Can I keep "see" and just delete "you"? I mean:

    If you come to my chat room and see any member bothers you, just tell me to bounce him.

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    Re: Using "if" two times in a sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by alex_genius_20 View Post
    Can I keep "see" and just delete "you"? I mean:

    If you come to my chat room and see any member bothers you, just tell me to bounce him.
    No.

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    Re: Using "if" two times in a sentence

    How about:

    If you come to my chat room and any member bothers you, just tell me to bounce them (or use him or her/him).

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