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    #1

    The negotiation included...

    Please check.

    The negotiation included not only expanding the market but to revise the accounts department. But everything didn't pass as well as I wanted, so we won't expact radical changes in the near future.

    Are tenses gramatically correct?

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    Re: The negotiation included...

    Quote Originally Posted by englishlearner77 View Post

    The negotiation​s included not only expanding the market but to revise revising the accounts department. However, everything didn't go as well as I wanted, so we won't expect radical changes in the near future.
    I suspect 'reorganising' would be better than ''revising'.

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    Re: The negotiation included...

    Quote Originally Posted by Rover_KE View Post
    I suspect 'reorganising' would be better than ''revising'.
    I agree with you about "reorganizing". In addition, I would add "also" after "but".

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    Re: The negotiation included...

    I couldn't find proper word and that was the reason using this one. (revising)

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