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When I was 15 years old, I had three very lovely kittens in my house; they were like my only friends.
I
always spent
all [of] my free time
to look
ing after them attentively.
Since they was born From birth until
they were the age of 4 months, there was not a day that went by that I didn’t
saw see their faces or
heard hear their voices, and I loved them so much.
One day Once, I woke up from a nightmare in the middle of the night.
(You can't say that it happened "one day" and "in the middle of the night" when referring to the same event.)
My heart was beating as though it was going to explode and
my body was full of I was drenched in sweat.
In On that
Saturday’s Saturday morning, I had to go to study Chinese language
with an impartial emotion. feeling calm and unemotional.
While I was On the way
to my class, the nightmare popped
up on into my mind again, and then
followed by and then I started thinking of my kittens.
I
cannot could not concentrate on the class because I was
unreasonably so concerned about my kittens.
When I
came got back home, everyone in my house was standing at the door and my mom said “View, your little kittens
had dead already are dead. It
is was an accident
. While they were playing
at near the car’s wheels, Miss
(no full stop here) Kaew
came to got into her car and
drove the car moved off. When the car
was started moving, the kittens didn’t run away from
those the wheels because they didn’t
know understand why their toys
moved were moving like that and still so they stayed
at the on top of the wheels
and they were crushed to death."At last, they were dead by those wheels.”
After she had finished speaking, I
immediately was started crying
. immediately Although many years have passed, I still
always think of them, my kittens.
And here is So that was my the worst day of my life
- it’s the day I lost my three dear friends.
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