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    Sentence Guidance Required in terms of structure and Grammar

    Hi Experts:-

    I request you to guide regarding the below sentence:-

    "His father advises him to expose himself to wider array of experiences to grow as an individual."

    I feel that there are too many "to" in this sentence,,is there another way to construct it or would you suggest to use it in same way

    Looking forward for your guidance.

    Thanks in advance.

    Rahul

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    Re: Sentence Guidance Required in terms of structure and Grammar

    Quote Originally Posted by rahul11 View Post
    Hi Experts:-

    I would apreciate your advice regarding the sentence below:-

    "His father advises him to expose himself to a wider array of experiences to grow as an individual."


    Thanks in advance.

    Rahul
    OK with the correction already given, but you could vary the expression a little by saying 'in order to grow...'
    Last edited by panglossa; 12-Dec-2013 at 08:50. Reason: text colouring error!

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    Re: Sentence Guidance Required in terms of structure and Grammar

    App​reciate.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Sentence Guidance Required in terms of structure and Grammar

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    App​reciate.
    Oops - typo. Sorry!!

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