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  1. Newbie
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    Post Please correct the grammar in the following letter

    Dear Sir,

    I have received mobile from company and it was activated on 04.12.2013. The handset having the following problem:

    • The battery is not with standing more than 8 hours.
    • Back ground light is always illuminating.
    • The head phone is not working and its wires are missing.

    So kindly replace the my mobile with new one.

    Thanks and Regards,

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    Re: Please correct the grammar in the following letter

    Raja149, in your last 4 posts I told you that your thread title must include words from your post. I even gave suggested titles. You have corrected the spelling of grammar which shows that you read at least one of those response yet you have used an inappropriate title again. You will find little help on this forum unless you follow the rules and our advice.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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