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    Hi teachers,

    Forgiving is a good thing but it does not mean that criminals are not to be restrained otherwise
    restlessness, lawlessness, and violence will increase in society. But only punishments are not enough.
    The reasons/causes of crimes will have to be eradicated. Please find grammatical mistakes.


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    Who wrote this paragraph? It looks like homework to me.

    You've been a member long enough to know that a better title would have been Forgiving is a good thing.



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    OK. Next time I'll be careful. :(
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    #4

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    The question remains: Will you submit this to be marked?
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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    It's a past English paper. I just try to translate those short paragraphs to check my translation.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Naeem Afzal View Post

    Forgiving is a good thing but it does not mean that criminals are not to be restrained, otherwise
    restlessness, lawlessness, and violence will increase in society. However, punishment alone is not enough.
    The causes of crime will have to be eradicated.
    Rover

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